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Post by arashi on Feb 9, 2014 9:18:15 GMT -5
Well you need to be able to describe how your techs function and their appearance and thats it. If you say your tech absorbs energy, you need to explain how. If you learn HOW to explain your techs and how they function, a whole new gateway of skills and abilities await you and your character hmm I'm not sure exactly how it does it....let me think...there's something in the wings that just takes the energy in. |
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Post by ~~~~~~~~~~~ on Feb 9, 2014 10:31:14 GMT -5
I think learning proper English comes before getting the descriptions right.
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Post by arashi on Feb 9, 2014 14:33:12 GMT -5
I think learning proper English comes before getting the descriptions right. Im on my phone and not an actual keyboard. It'd be a lot different then trust me my English prof is a douche when it comes to grading and I aced the class. |
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Post by Admin on Feb 9, 2014 15:55:16 GMT -5
Well your english is fine, trust me, just need to learn to explain how it works.
And you just said you don't know how your own tech works with the wings? o.o;
Edit: So you can't even explain a technique you made... o.o
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Post by arashi on Feb 9, 2014 16:50:34 GMT -5
Well your english is fine, trust me, just need to learn to explain how it works. And you just said you don't know how your own tech works with the wings? o.o; Edit: So you can't even explain a technique you made... o.o no I can I'm trying to make a good simile for it. It's like a sponge you know when it touches water it absorbs it. It's kind of like that except when the energy touches the wings it gets sucked in. |
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Post by Admin on Feb 9, 2014 16:59:19 GMT -5
Oh I know the whole sponge thing, you got the out of the who what where when why how you got the Who what where, just need the when, how and why.
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Post by arashi on Feb 9, 2014 17:13:10 GMT -5
Oh I know the whole sponge thing, you got the out of the who what where when why how you got the Who what where, just need the when, how and why. what do you mean? |
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Post by Admin on Feb 9, 2014 17:20:50 GMT -5
You have a set of wings which just absorbs all energies into them which comes towards your just because you say they can. Thats the issue.
You need a process to explain it. i could give you plenty, but I want to hear what you come up with on your own, if you can you might be able to use it in a more advanced form then what you intend. Energy is a very general word. You see it as beams and magic based strikes. Energy is consumed and used in even physical action, aka Kinetic and Potential Energy.
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Post by arashi on Feb 9, 2014 19:37:40 GMT -5
You have a set of wings which just absorbs all energies into them which comes towards your just because you say they can. Thats the issue. You need a process to explain it. i could give you plenty, but I want to hear what you come up with on your own, if you can you might be able to use it in a more advanced form then what you intend. Energy is a very general word. You see it as beams and magic based strikes. Energy is consumed and used in even physical action, aka Kinetic and Potential Energy. ok not physical energy. Hmm let me think.. |
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Post by Admin on Feb 9, 2014 22:44:30 GMT -5
No rush, but you need to be able to explain all your techs incase an opponent is unable to comprehend it
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